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Wednesday 14 March 2018

My all about me poem



This is my all about me poem that I was working on .

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  1. Unknown28 March 2018 at 10:29


    Kia orana my name is Cordell.
    I like all the pictures and the colours look really good.
    Use more full stops.
    How long did it take to make this?

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    1. Unknown6 April 2018 at 09:56

      Thank you little brother . i will remember to put full stops.

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  2. Unknown28 March 2018 at 10:47


    Hi my name is Ila.
    I like how your pictures are set out on each side.
    Use more full stops.
    Where did you get the pictures from?

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    1. Unknown6 April 2018 at 09:58

      Thank you Ila . i will remember your advise and fix my sentins

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