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Tuesday 19 September 2017

the gruffalo

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The Gruffalo
The gruffalo is a horrifying creature because he has a poisonous wart on his nose and he has a black tongue who has a black tongue. He has purple prickles on his back ,he has fangs plus he has sharp claws and he has a thick tail.He has big horns as well.
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  1. Moira27 September 2017 at 09:58

    Hi Keisha, check your first sentence. Does the ending make sense? I think you may have repeated yourself. Re read your writing, please.

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